11 Tips to Help You Avoid Telling Writing

• Show, don’t tell! • Be aware of which dramatic mode you’re using • Avoid a big info dump • How to get rid of info dumps • Avoid ‘As you know’ Syndrome • How to show rather than tell • Think of your story as a stage production • To eliminate exposition in story, "film it" • Embedding exposition into your story • When exposition is necessary in a story • What if I edit out too much exposition? • BONUS: “No, no! The adventures first, explanations take such a dreadful time.” - Lewis Carroll  Professional Book Editor: Having your novel, short story or nonfiction manuscript proofread or edited before submitting it can prove invaluable. In an economic climate where you face heavy competition, your writing needs a second eye to give you the edge. I can provide that second eye. // <A HREF=“http://ws-na.amazon-adsystem.com/widgets/q?rt=tf_cw&ServiceVersion=20070822&MarketPlace=US&ID=V20070822%2FUS%2Fkiersfam-20%2F8010%2F106865e2-a4a3-45dc-80f0-afd69d56aaf0&Operation=NoScript”>Amazon.com Widgets</A> Related articles Writing Inspiration: Seek another's advice Five Great Quotations about the Writing Process Writing Inspiration: Who are you? Make tables readable in your self-published book Four ways to write a great tweet that sells books

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